Yes, the real problems are that the right branches need to be wired to permanently improve their placement, and the apex needs to be distinguished between what should be upper branching on the right side.
@mcpesq817 asked if there were comments about the placement of the tree in the pot. Not from Dan Robinson. But Kathy had quite a bit to say about it in our workshop last spring. Too far to the left and too far back in the pot. Which is why the right side is less developed and less vigorous than the left. Even though the tree was repotted this past spring, I intend to do it again in spring '17 to correct this error.