@Clorgan
I like this side as a "front". Consider tilting the tree more sharply to the right so that the left most branch is more vertical and the first sub trunk of the "broom", the left of middle branch would be sub trunk number 2, then there is the number 3, thus making the number 4 branch a near horizontal or slightly below horizontal branch. Number 4 would be kept as a branch rather than a "sub-trunk" of the broom.
Or you could tilt it the other way. Either way, a tilt to the trunk would add more movement.