Thinking a couple things went on. Transition issues from moving indoors. Old leaves dying off per
@RaginCajun Watering technique/timing. Wiring issues. Also one cluster appeared to die off due to some unknown cause - guessing mechanical, wiring?
A couple observations.
Garage storage - it’s fine to do this, especially considering the weather Huntsville has been having in the teens at night. 13F/ -10.5C is not good for any azalea in a pot imho. The first year is the hardest. As
@Glaucus mentioned all trees kept in indoor storage need to be properly “hardened off to transition them outside. It takes a bit more than a week here of bring the azaleas in and out for increasing amounts of time.
After five years of keeping some azaleas inside I’ve learned a lot. My watering method once the media is near dry is to soak the pot/media in water until completely waterlogged, then to take the pot out of the water and chock the pot up on a slant until all excess water runs off. In our garage with overhead led lights on 14-16 hours, azaleas require water every 5-8 days. You will have to figure your situation out.
Stylistically- These azalea were not styled prior to sale. As a result, there are a whole lot of long branches emanating from one point. This means the length of these branches would usually be pushed in quite a bit if a clump style was desired. Otherwise many will have to be removed to create other bonsai styles, with the remaining branches shortened.
Wiring - wire doesn’t have to be laid on beautifully, but it does have to be functional. Crossing wires is avoided for functional and aesthetic reasons. Functionally, when wires are crossed, additional pressure is exerted on the branch at the crossing points, which often causes additional external and sometimes internal damage and certainly a loss of functionality.
Criss-crossing wires down a branch certainly loses functionality - one the branch is twisted one direction, one of the wires becomes loosen and so on.
Here are a couple wiring resources to help you.
Bonsai Wiring Essentials
Structural wiring
Bonsai Detail wiring
Finally, don’t believe they need fungicide at this point. If needed begin with 2 tbsp 3% H2O2 in one qt of H2O spray bottle. Mix and use immediately.
That’s a lot, so stopping now.
Cheers
DSD sends