I'm not a bougie person, but this is a nice one. For me, I'd loose the stuff on the right side, that isn't really part of the main trunk.
I think you could grow that branch on the top left of the main trunk out something like this:
I'm nervously writing this as I don't want to offend you but I think in the interest of learning and sharing Ill do it. Although I admire your drawing skills I dont think the tree you've drawn is a good example of bonsai. The base is way too big and heavy to then have a sparse foliage crown like a bunjin. You've inspired me to draw more. Better to learn from a drawing then chopping and growing a tree for 5 years and receive the same criticism
I've developed a bit of a hobby of looking at pictures of people's trees and drawing out how I would shape them, though I rarely post them; I don't want to become the guy that offers virts for every tree people post, yet has no trees of his own! I appreciate the feedback, though.
No offense taken at all! I appreciate it. Being in school leaves me with limited options when it comes to growing bonsai, so I try to compensate by "working" with trees with pencil and paper in the hopes that once I finally find myself able to work with some real trees I'll have trained my eye to recognize what works and what doesn't.
I've developed a bit of a hobby of looking at pictures of people's trees and drawing out how I would shape them, though I rarely post them; I don't want to become the guy that offers virts for every tree people post, yet has no trees of his own! I appreciate the feedback, though.
Feel free to post your drawings (if any) on my tree threads.Hopefully, we can all learn from it especially you seem to be a good sport.
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As far as style... I would keep the deadwood to
a bare minimal and try to do more of a formal design.
On a Bougie... I would never create or plan to
have deadwood in the design, unless of course it
already has it.![]()
I think that is a good way to go. It maintains the interesting features of the trunk. Make sure you treat any Bougainvillea deadwood with lime sulfur and minwax wood hardener. It will rot out.
Tona