Scroll is too large, but otherwise I like it! Changing the scroll will also bring more emphasis to the accent. I agree with redvw5 in that I prefer scrolls with art/illustration versus script.
Al can you tell us the size of the scroll?You will all be amazed later when you know everything.
Incidently this scroll is the one that is shown on Ms. Metaxis picture in Willie Benz book " Bonsai Kusomono Suiseki a practical guide for organizing displays with plants and stones", page 58.
It says,(I have no idea how to spell it), Kan jui sai or "view how you wish" or "Kanon, Goddess of mercy is here" or "Look into yourself"
Wow. This display just blows me away.
I love this display and the solemnity of its flow. It's hard to put into words adequately. It's stately.
Chris