Cosmic Bonsai - First Attempt

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In this thread, the OP mentions The Cosmic Burton style which intrigued me enough to look it up and purchase a book from the author who invented the ideas for this concept of bonsai styling, Laurent Darrieux.


Mr. Darrieux has credibility in the world of bonsai, this is his bio-page:

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I find the book utterly fascinating and am still trying to grasp the authors intent, as well as the styling techniques.
As exemplified by the cover photo, I believe the idea is to create trees that would be growing on a different planet, perhaps, or in a futuristic time on earth where vastly different and unimaginable conditions may exist. The styling philosophy includes not following traditional bonsai guidelines, de-emphasizing ramification, not constraining the trees growth in the same way as traditional bonsai, but using it to further the design, and creating extremes of twisted branches, scarification and imagination. One is still striving to create the feel of an ancient tree with a story to tell, just not of our planet or epoch.

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I have two trees that I found a few years ago when cleaning out my late aunts’ house and overgrown, neglected garden. I thought they were native Doug firs that she had stuck in bonsai pots, probably many years ago (certainly more than a decade) and which were subsequently lost in the tangle of her yard as she aged and declined. The foliage was soft, sparse and anemic looking. They seemed barely alive when I found them.

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I repotted them right away, together in one large pot, in good, well draining bonsai soil and they received fertilizer and watering along with the rest of my collection, plus a half hearted attempt at wiring. I never had much hope for them as bonsai, but definitely a sentimental feeling for the trees.
A couple more years went by, the trees responded with lots of healthy growth at the apex and on most the branch ends, and I realized that they are spruces of some sort, not firs, as the new growth was stiff, prickly and decidedly spruce-like. After reading Cosmic Bonsai, I determined that this style would totally suit these beings, with their long flexible branches and tufts of lush foliage on the tips.

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I played with the idea of bending and twisting the trunks, but in the end, the story they are telling is one that mirrors their real life - quietly struggling to grow at a normal pace, lacking in the basics of food and water, reaching for what sun they could find, tall and lanky, suddenly yanked from their familiar habitat into an unknown alien world and bombarded with unfamiliar nutrients and an abundance of life giving water and sunshine, which caused strange and wonderful reactions in their demeanors, almost like a joyous dancing of their branches, undulating with delight!

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After the branches set and the wire is removed I will experiment with the scarification process. I think I can make the trunks look interesting with some contorted shari, fooling the eye with movement.
I like the simple concrete pot they call home, I think it suits the narrative just fine, but will be on the lookout for something special for the future.

I was indifferent towards the trees, keeping them on the bench only as a sentimental tribute to my aunt, but now … well, I love them now, to be honest. I know this concept is not to everyone’s taste (maybe no one but me, lol!) but I hope some of you might be inspired to take a look at the book and maybe experiment a little with the ideas it presents, and to share those with me here on BonsaiNut (I already have ideas for attempt #2).
Cheers,
Ci

A last example from the book:

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Wow, this is quite out of the box! Very creative. I applaud you for it! The concept is quite interesting.

I had never seen this style before. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to seeing your progress!

….Maybe I will try a “cosmic bonsai” …….:)
 
It is compelling, isn’t it? It was also very fun to wire - just taking every branch and doing whatever I wished, yet still trying to use an artistic eye.
The e-book can be found here for just under $10


Thanks to @Marco B for his thread that originally mentioned the style.
 
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there's really nothing new under the sun...The archaic "octopus" style of bonsai was practiced in Japan and China for a while in periods before they opened up to the west. It is very similar (or identical, without the accompanying display items). The octopus style was eventually mostly abandon by Japanese artists because they emphasized the grotesque at the expense of "natural." Also, from what I'm reading this method emphasizes non-traditional display elements (battlebots, etc) as an integral part of compositions.

 
Awesome project. I imagine quite a learning curve mostly about removing 3 strips of bark a year. The twist or turns next to the bends should be made before and you need to follow the grain.
I see a lot of bends but few twists and turns in your picture. (but I have bad eyes)
 
Awesome project. I imagine quite a learning curve mostly about removing 3 strips of bark a year. The twist or turns next to the bends should be made before and you need to follow the grain.
I see a lot of bends but few twists and turns in your picture. (but I have bad eyes)

There are some complete circular twists, but as I worked on each branch I felt like they should mostly cascade away and down from the straight trunks. I intend to let all the branches run until they spill away along the ground in chaotic twisting waves, so more loops can come into play.

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I am going to start this on a Melon Seed ficus. Its not that big now but ficus should be a natural, and I can keep in going this winter.

Great! I hope you start a thread and use the word “Cosmic” in the title so it’s easy to find.
My next attempt will be a yamadori hawthorn that I have marked for collection in early spring. It has a fat sumo-like trunk (chopped down over and over) and would be much closer to an octopus style after I get done with it, lol!
 
@cishepard
"Cosmic trees" so far no life has been found beyond earth. The concept of alien trees is pure fantasy (crap). I really don't think much of this as a "new style", @rockm is right, it appears to be a repackaging of the octopus style.

In your examples that you have created you have straight trunks with contorted branches. This is not telling a coherent story. The same forces that bent up your branches would have bent up the trunks. Straight and straight or contorted and contorted would make sense.
 
The concept of alien trees is pure fantasy (crap).

Well, for those of us who don’t consider fantasy as ‘crap’, the beauty of it lies in unlimited imagination. I’m imagining my trees as conscious beings who are expressing their delight through the dancing undulation of their own arms after being relocated to an alien world of plenty from their previous life of hardship and struggle. No forces bent the branches, they did it themselves.
It doesn’t have to make sense… my personal definition of fantasy. ~•♥•~
 
In your examples that you have created you have straight trunks with contorted branches. This is not telling a coherent story. The same forces that bent up your branches would have bent up the trunks. Straight and straight or contorted and contorted would make sense.
Is a coherent story necessary for someone to enjoy this form simply for ones own pleasure. It is not a bonsai by most people's terms so you shouldn't feel threatened by it.
so far no life has been found beyond earth
And this is the height of arrogance.
 
I've wondered before how one might create the an effect in bonsai that mimics the twisting found in the trunks of some species when they get very old. I wonder if techniques like this could be adapted for that purpose.

Following out of curiosity.
One's vision of art might not match another's, but there's always something to be learned.
 
In this thread, the OP mentions The Cosmic Burton style which intrigued me enough to look it up and purchase a book from the author who invented the ideas for this concept of bonsai styling, Laurent Darrieux.


Mr. Darrieux has credibility in the world of bonsai, this is his bio-page:

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I find the book utterly fascinating and am still trying to grasp the authors intent, as well as the styling techniques.
As exemplified by the cover photo, I believe the idea is to create trees that would be growing on a different planet, perhaps, or in a futuristic time on earth where vastly different and unimaginable conditions may exist. The styling philosophy includes not following traditional bonsai guidelines, de-emphasizing ramification, not constraining the trees growth in the same way as traditional bonsai, but using it to further the design, and creating extremes of twisted branches, scarification and imagination. One is still striving to create the feel of an ancient tree with a story to tell, just not of our planet or epoch.

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I have two trees that I found a few years ago when cleaning out my late aunts’ house and overgrown, neglected garden. I thought they were native Doug firs that she had stuck in bonsai pots, probably many years ago (certainly more than a decade) and which were subsequently lost in the tangle of her yard as she aged and declined. The foliage was soft, sparse and anemic looking. They seemed barely alive when I found them.

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I repotted them right away, together in one large pot, in good, well draining bonsai soil and they received fertilizer and watering along with the rest of my collection, plus a half hearted attempt at wiring. I never had much hope for them as bonsai, but definitely a sentimental feeling for the trees.
A couple more years went by, the trees responded with lots of healthy growth at the apex and on most the branch ends, and I realized that they are spruces of some sort, not firs, as the new growth was stiff, prickly and decidedly spruce-like. After reading Cosmic Bonsai, I determined that this style would totally suit these beings, with their long flexible branches and tufts of lush foliage on the tips.

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I played with the idea of bending and twisting the trunks, but in the end, the story they are telling is one that mirrors their real life - quietly struggling to grow at a normal pace, lacking in the basics of food and water, reaching for what sun they could find, tall and lanky, suddenly yanked from their familiar habitat into an unknown alien world and bombarded with unfamiliar nutrients and an abundance of life giving water and sunshine, which caused strange and wonderful reactions in their demeanors, almost like a joyous dancing of their branches, undulating with delight!

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After the branches set and the wire is removed I will experiment with the scarification process. I think I can make the trunks look interesting with some contorted shari, fooling the eye with movement.
I like the simple concrete pot they call home, I think it suits the narrative just fine, but will be on the lookout for something special for the future.

I was indifferent towards the trees, keeping them on the bench only as a sentimental tribute to my aunt, but now … well, I love them now, to be honest. I know this concept is not to everyone’s taste (maybe no one but me, lol!) but I hope some of you might be inspired to take a look at the book and maybe experiment a little with the ideas it presents, and to share those with me here on BonsaiNut (I already have ideas for attempt #2).
Cheers,
Ci

A last example from the book:

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Way to go. One need not be constrained by others shackles.
 
I really like this. And I was thinking about doing something similar to this with my Ash tree... I'm glad it has a name, something I can research. Thank you for sharing this.
 
Woooowee, I love your tree and want you to do one with that method you don't have to scarify. I Like how you speak of the dancing arms of trees who did things on their own, that's a good artist statement.
 
I'm not "threatened" by this. I'm just weary of the marketing of something "original" when it's not. This style takes a lot of work for not much return--and probably from what I've seen, at the expense of the tree if done aggressively. From what I can see, the artist uses an archaic style (Which was abandon a hundred years ago because it mostly reinforced the notion that bonsai were "grotesque, unnatural, stunted trees") in combination with simple and strange display elements.

Sure, do what you want unshackled from the nefarious bonsai police (really? I wanna see a badge), but don't pass it off as revolutionary and act persecuted when folks don't really have the taste for it. Acceptance runs both ways, you are free to like it, others may not. That's the way it works.
 
I'm not "threatened" by this. I'm just weary of the marketing of something "original" when it's not. This style takes a lot of work for not much return--and probably from what I've seen, at the expense of the tree if done aggressively. From what I can see, the artist uses an archaic style (Which was abandon a hundred years ago because it mostly reinforced the notion that bonsai were "grotesque, unnatural, stunted trees") in combination with simple and strange display elements.

Sure, do what you want unshackled from the nefarious bonsai police (really? I wanna see a badge), but don't pass it off as revolutionary and act persecuted when folks don't really have the taste for it. Acceptance runs both ways, you are free to like it, others may not. That's the way it works.
I know you are not threatened by it and I think I am pretty clear on your views and I welcome them. I don't at all view this as something original but I find it intriguing. Having studied archaic Asian cultures for several decades and primitive art for much longer, I place much credence in the adage "There is nothing new under the sun."
 
In this thread, the OP mentions The Cosmic Burton style which intrigued me enough to look it up and purchase a book from the author who invented the ideas for this concept of bonsai styling, Laurent Darrieux.


Mr. Darrieux has credibility in the world of bonsai, this is his bio-page:

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I find the book utterly fascinating and am still trying to grasp the authors intent, as well as the styling techniques.
As exemplified by the cover photo, I believe the idea is to create trees that would be growing on a different planet, perhaps, or in a futuristic time on earth where vastly different and unimaginable conditions may exist. The styling philosophy includes not following traditional bonsai guidelines, de-emphasizing ramification, not constraining the trees growth in the same way as traditional bonsai, but using it to further the design, and creating extremes of twisted branches, scarification and imagination. One is still striving to create the feel of an ancient tree with a story to tell, just not of our planet or epoch.

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I have two trees that I found a few years ago when cleaning out my late aunts’ house and overgrown, neglected garden. I thought they were native Doug firs that she had stuck in bonsai pots, probably many years ago (certainly more than a decade) and which were subsequently lost in the tangle of her yard as she aged and declined. The foliage was soft, sparse and anemic looking. They seemed barely alive when I found them.

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I repotted them right away, together in one large pot, in good, well draining bonsai soil and they received fertilizer and watering along with the rest of my collection, plus a half hearted attempt at wiring. I never had much hope for them as bonsai, but definitely a sentimental feeling for the trees.
A couple more years went by, the trees responded with lots of healthy growth at the apex and on most the branch ends, and I realized that they are spruces of some sort, not firs, as the new growth was stiff, prickly and decidedly spruce-like. After reading Cosmic Bonsai, I determined that this style would totally suit these beings, with their long flexible branches and tufts of lush foliage on the tips.

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I played with the idea of bending and twisting the trunks, but in the end, the story they are telling is one that mirrors their real life - quietly struggling to grow at a normal pace, lacking in the basics of food and water, reaching for what sun they could find, tall and lanky, suddenly yanked from their familiar habitat into an unknown alien world and bombarded with unfamiliar nutrients and an abundance of life giving water and sunshine, which caused strange and wonderful reactions in their demeanors, almost like a joyous dancing of their branches, undulating with delight!

View attachment 452738

After the branches set and the wire is removed I will experiment with the scarification process. I think I can make the trunks look interesting with some contorted shari, fooling the eye with movement.
I like the simple concrete pot they call home, I think it suits the narrative just fine, but will be on the lookout for something special for the future.

I was indifferent towards the trees, keeping them on the bench only as a sentimental tribute to my aunt, but now … well, I love them now, to be honest. I know this concept is not to everyone’s taste (maybe no one but me, lol!) but I hope some of you might be inspired to take a look at the book and maybe experiment a little with the ideas it presents, and to share those with me here on BonsaiNut (I already have ideas for attempt #2).
Cheers,
Ci

A last example from the book:

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Laurent had posted some interesting photographic content on IBC some years ago. Posted as "law" I believe. Cursory search should find content......

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I know you are not threatened by it and I think I am pretty clear on your views and I welcome them. I don't at all view this as something original but I find it intriguing. Having studied archaic Asian cultures for several decades and primitive art for much longer, I place much credence in the adage "There is nothing new under the sun."
A good portion of the Vietnamese bonsai are developed under the “Quái” influence. Regardless of size or style be it informal, slant, or cascade etc., they are all created to appear out of the norm, strange, or out of this world. Like you said, this has been around for a long time. Interesting yes but far from unheard of. I like the scarring technique and may try it.
 
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